B- It shows like check points in his experience in the military.
C- The captions kinda tell you the main idea of the photo.
D- Basically he joins the military having to say goodbye to his family and his girlfriend. during the military he stats getting comfortable and on his first time going back home he talked to his girlfriend about getting married. when he went back he claimed that basic training was nothing like the real deal. throughout the time he was there he had some family issues. When Ian got home him and his fiance officially got married.
E- Past tense
F-
- there were 1 or 2 on each caption, some were incomplete.
- They provide basic who or where.
- extra things like where.
- why they are doing it.
- Yes
- Yes.
H- well when you write the story you can include words that makes the reader feel like they are there.
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